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September 28, 2005
Teddy Took The "U" In Ardour
(Couldn't duplicate the original's italics and spacing, see Poetry Daily)
Ardor
No wonder ardour couldn't survive
the bullying linguistic fist of the Hero
of the Battle of San Juan Hill,
robust and lusty Theodore Roosevelt,
who also managed, upon becoming
the youngest and most virile President
of a young and expanding country,
to eliminate the u from the scents
of arbour, the necessities of labour
and neighbour, the cacophony of clangour,
the heat of rancour.
O Teddy, burly
bespectacled one, monumentally chiseled
into the granite of the mountainside above
the Badlands, see how the world has grown
harder to command than any Commander-
in-Chief could have imagined a century ago:
no Presidential declaration can alter the facts
of spelling — though it still can delete faces
that leave us with a last short o on their lips.
Roy Jacobstein
The Threepenny Review
Fall 2005
(via Poetry Daily)
Posted by Josh at September 28, 2005 11:49 AM
Comments
like "robust and lusty"..that's about all I can say that I like about this poem. Some good assonance in the poem on "U's" , but don't like consonantal sounds of cacophony and clangour--too loudly spoken.
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at October 2, 2005 09:40 PM