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January 15, 2005

Shadow Sapphic

"To the person in the bell jar, blank and stopped as a dead baby,
the world itself is the bad dream." Sylvia Plath's The Bell Jar


Might there have been a Salinger in old Yeat's house?

What do we say to "Yeat's lived here" ? Do we call her

from those clear vowels? Hopelessness never dressed like

Sylvia's shadows.


Ariel's nigger-eyed berries, bloody mouthfuls,

rabbit catchers - images darkness cannot

catch, but slowly imitate. Balloons, queer-moons,

dominate every


letter. Clam-like curlicues in her jerky

scribbles that cocoons would be jealous of. Yet

how did she concieve? Of her special shadows,

Agony answered


all her questions. Myopic owls, we blink wide-

eyed into a one-in-a-million bleeding,

repeating, meditation of insult, intuition,

roses, and kisses.


Shadows marry shadows in Sylvia's asylum.

Laboratory jars are the key to learning

pickled poems, dust to those people doctoring

sheets of blank paper.

Posted by tony at January 15, 2005 11:11 PM

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Chop Shop is BACK. I'm sorry it took so long. Sorry about the comments that were lost. The good news is that the comment spam is gone, hopefully for good. Keep on posting!!
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If I didn't comment on this one before, then here goes.

I really like, "Shadows marry shadows." I haven't scanned the whole thing, but the descending trochee's are working best in this line and in "pickled poems."

Only suggestion is a new title, only because the syntax of Shadow Sapphic is archaic sounding. Sapphic Shadow?

Posted by: josh [TypeKey Profile Page] at February 19, 2005 01:00 AM

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