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January 15, 2005
Shadow Sapphic
"To the person in the bell jar, blank and stopped as a dead baby,
the world itself is the bad dream." Sylvia Plath's The Bell Jar
Might there have been a Salinger in old Yeat's house?
What do we say to "Yeat's lived here" ? Do we call her
from those clear vowels? Hopelessness never dressed like
Sylvia's shadows.
Ariel's nigger-eyed berries, bloody mouthfuls,
rabbit catchers - images darkness cannot
catch, but slowly imitate. Balloons, queer-moons,
dominate every
letter. Clam-like curlicues in her jerky
scribbles that cocoons would be jealous of. Yet
how did she concieve? Of her special shadows,
Agony answered
all her questions. Myopic owls, we blink wide-
eyed into a one-in-a-million bleeding,
repeating, meditation of insult, intuition,
roses, and kisses.
Shadows marry shadows in Sylvia's asylum.
Laboratory jars are the key to learning
pickled poems, dust to those people doctoring
sheets of blank paper.
Posted by tony at January 15, 2005 11:11 PM
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If I didn't comment on this one before, then here goes.
I really like, "Shadows marry shadows." I haven't scanned the whole thing, but the descending trochee's are working best in this line and in "pickled poems."
Only suggestion is a new title, only because the syntax of Shadow Sapphic is archaic sounding. Sapphic Shadow?
Posted by: josh
at February 19, 2005 01:00 AM